Hi again!! Anyway, where was i? Oh yeah, maybe that whole front room thing could actually work. All i really need to do is add in a bit of better dialogue than, "what's for dinner?" "Chicken" "cool", because that just sucks majorly. I was thinking some thing like this:
Man: "hey there love, how was your day?"
Woman: "not bad thanks dear, oh your mother called again"
Man: "yeah sorry about that (laughs) so whats for dinner then?"
Woman: "i was thinking maybe a chicken casserole?"
Man: "Ahhh, just what a man wants, to come home to a blooming good meal and his missus"
..... That does seem rather 50's doesn't it? ... bugger .... maybe make it less sexist but you get the idea. Just something simple about a nice loving couple ..... you don't really see enough of it these days do you? It's all 'war this' and 'divorce that' and 'teenager *blah blah blah* murder *blah blah blah* kids now-a-days' so maybe an A-level video about a nice couple will make this world a nicer place. I've gone off topic again haven't i? Oh well, maybe a little tweek on the last two lines of dialogue is needed .... maybe just do the whole thing again on the same basis .... hmmmmm. Well i'm gonna end this one here because i still don't actually know the limit for these posts. Should really check it shouldn't i? Anyway, back in a tick.
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